All Comments on 'Vision of the Spirit Ch. 15'

Seems like the story was about Tom and Hannah, then poof you start all about the Chief and his wife and such. You go whole chapters without even mentioning Tom and Hannah. You need to weave a little of both couples into a chapter or write 2 different stories about either couple. I was interested in Tom and Hannah's story, but you hijacked the story for something else and it's been downhill since.