All Comments on 'Visions Unveiled Ch. 04'

by IrishBelle

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ale1975ale1975about 10 years ago
5*

It was too short, but I was excited to see an update. Looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Brilliant!

Awww, finally they've found each other, lovely. Please don't keep us waiting too long for chapter 5. :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Amazing

This chapter had my attention from beginning to end.The build up is fascinating. I am so thrilled Shane found his mate and will fulfill his promise to Ilsa.It will be interesting to see what Shane has in store for Justine. I see agonizing pain ahead for Justine. Very good story and writing,anticipating the next chapter was sorry to see this one end.

AMHJ89AMHJ89about 10 years ago

Wow this is so good

thedevilslayerthedevilslayerabout 10 years ago
Too good.

Brilliant,fucking brilliant.So good.It was mind numbing.Can't find words to express.Do a favor and please write a bit more quickly.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Love it so far

Waiting for the next chapter. Hopefully it will be soon?!

macp1004macp1004about 10 years ago
awesome

Love this! Please write more soon..

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Aww hell,

these damnable onions have my eye leaking!

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