All Comments on 'Visiting Brian in the Hospital'

Using correct words adds to the enjoyment of the read. Wrong words detract and interrupt the flow of the read.

waste = garbage, trash

waist = mid-section of the body

Anonymous, you are absolutely right. Such mistakes do take away from the reader's enjoyment. Thank you for pointing out my mistake. I'm new to the site and, unfortunately, it does not seem that I can edit the submission.