All Comments on 'Vitavie's Vignette No. 01: The Waitress'

A wondrously lovely erotic vignette.

Thank you, Maydaypilot! I can only try

Great sense of place, atmosphere, sensual characters. The taste and smell of coffee!

Oh yes!

I enjoyed this!

Well written erotica…delightful sexual tension and release….

I like the story. It is restrained, erotic, not pornographic. (Nothing wrong with porn, of course.) There are moments for porn and others for more restrained stuff

...and sometimes, just sometimes, you find a jewel like this vignette, here in Lit, of all the places. Vitavie, I do suspect you are a great writer.