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All Comments on 'Volleyball Girls Ch. 01'

by mastergoose

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Candy_Kane54Candy_Kane543 months ago

Nice first effort. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this.

mastergoosemastergoose3 months agoAuthor

Thanks! I have chapter 2 pending and a few other ideas. First time putting anything out on my own, so always welcome feedback :)

NoLongerAnonNoLongerAnon3 months ago

This is a very promising start. How will Katie and Megan feel about what they have just done? I look forward to finding out.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

A bit better proofing and the score goes up.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Loved the whole premise. Loved the tension filled build up. Look forward to reading more.

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