All Comments on 'Vows'

WOW! Great Story! Great Writing! 5 stars to the writer! Wow, what a plot! Magic Woman, teaches Magic Man! Holy Moly. This story made me feel like I could be that guy! Thank You Very Much!

@tranlan69er..

Really?? You could deduct that the mom left for 10 minutes and called a friend,who called a friend whose kid had a similar problem? Wow, you really are smarter than the rest of us.

It's like From Dusk Till Dawn, except with Loving Wives and Mind Control instead of (censored) and (redacted)! 5 stars!

Eh, disliked it, unfortunately.

What was the point of turning him into a chick magnet sex god and then tying him down so he could not use those skills on others. His continuing adventures could have been entertaining for many chapters, but now he is married.

What are those lights hovering in the sky, maw?

is that a typo in ur title description? thats a bad omen hmm to read or not to read that is the question. hmm them comments suggest there some sort of supernatural transformation happened eh idk maybe i'll come back to it if i get really bored. not too keen on amateur scifi

"If you were married to her, would you let me fuck you right now?"

"Oh, yes." yeah that killed it for me.

u should go over ur stories before posting them that was a hard read. u should stop leaving words out of sentences so u can make complete sentences. felt like that entire story was one big typo

Great story. Love all your work. Thanks!

This got stupid fast.

Enjoyed the story. Thanks for your writing.

This is the essence of stupid and really really moronic. It's like one of those dumb fuck science fiction stories at saddle tramp writes

WTF? And, who cares?

Damn.... Sign me up for counseling! 5 stars

This goes out to “ harryvagina”. I read your comment about Saddletramp. He is one of the best writers on Lit. If you believe that this story sucks as bad as a Saddletrampntale, then I guess you are actually complementing demander. BTW- I looked at your profile, and didn’t see any stories crafted by you. Why don’t you try to write one of two, and see how the critics, feel about your work? 5 stars

How did his mother come across Niaomi?

Fun to read..

A little strange but a great story.

Started off with the makings of a good story,but then turned into a make believe.

What is happening ???

Sorry. The story lost me when the "therapist" entered the picture. I would have turned around and walked away 30 seconds into the meeting and every 30 seconds after.

Can't keep your characters' names straight. Seems like an important thing for a story teller.

Wth? That story took a weird turn on page 2. And Naomi stays doing her therapy, and somehow none of it is like what she did with Frank? Strange ...

Really good story, you can say it’s silly nonsense, but it’s a good story, well done.

A strange tale, including some illogic. I kinda liked it, although I found myself skimming parts of the tale. Four stars.

JPB NOT BOB

"He had plastic bags - leaf bags" TOO FUNNY! Sounds like you may have actually done this in the past. Every time I read about the husband packing up all her stuff, I think about how little one can get in a regular trash bag. One of the great oxymorons: 30 gallon Trash Can Liners. Just try fitting a 30 gal liner on/in a 30 gallon can!! Great story, though.