All Comments on 'Voyeur Ch. 09'

I like that she's sweet, the brother is an interesting twist. I'm not sure I want this to end though! I hope they escape on that plane!

I love where this story is going! Ray became a lot more dislikeable in my eyes, but the introduction of his brother and their past begins to explain his actions and mentality.

I'm also concerned Rachel is on the verge (or already going through) a mental breakdown, really hope she manages to pull through!

Can't wait to see where this is going, keep up the amazing work =D

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Was just the extra piece you needed to bring us to an exciting conclusion. Of course, I know truth and justice will prevail in the end, but what casualties will arrive in the process, well, I'm very pleasantly in the dark on that score. So...Ray, Logan, Ahmed, and Ben? And your fabulous writing? It doesn't get any better than this! I eagerly await the exciting conclusion. Thank you, Bellie, for such an exciting and sexy story. Five stars (duh), JB

What a family. Ray is one nasty human being and his brother is worse. A pair Mom and Dad must be proud of.

What a clever twist to add the threat of a villain against a villain in the closing chapters of the story. Dear old Ray has really lost it over Rachel and he is now gotten himself in peril from two directions. He is so besotted with Rachel he still thinks kidnapping was a good idea. I look forward to the grand mashup of these three black ops veterans.

I would say your chapters are always worth the wait but I don't want to give you any inducement to make us wait a moment longer. Poor Rachel has been through some rough treatment and deserves rescue, soon, please.

Another great chapter.

OMG I need Ben to rescue her now!!!! She needs him and he needs her. Ray needs to fucking die.

I’m excited to read the last chapter but I really don’t want this to end!!! I hope there’s gonna be an epilogue 😭😭😭😭

Please don't leave us hanging!! :) I love your writing and your characters really come to life !

Can't wait for the update, please don't leave us hanging until 2020!

I really don't want the next one to be the last chapter though :(

This story is everything. I feel all the emotions the characters are going through. Love your work!

I know I was shipping Rachel with Ben but these last few chapters have left me very confused..even though Ray is a sociopath, I lowkey feel bad for him man.. I somehow wish he makes it out alive or sum idk.. But I'm just not ready to see him die? This is the one of the few times where I feel really bad for the antagonist tbh.

THIS STORY IS THE FUCKING SHIT!!!!

Ha, I love it! Goodness, and all the crazy stuff Ray was thinking as he force fucked her for a 2nd time while drugged? Fucking perfect! Dammit, I love you, author!