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"Damn straight," Kevin lightly punched him. "I'd hug you, but you reek of sex. Carry on," he said in a military tone, and followed the others before Ben could offer a comeback.
Ben peered suspiciously after them, ensuring they were definitely gone, before quickly slamming the door and dumping the gift basket on a side table. He was still painfully erect.
"Baby rabbit! I'm coming for you!" he called in a threat of sorts, desperately sprinting up the stairs.
The door almost came off its hinges when he forcefully opened it, his breath caught at the sight of Rachel sitting up against the headboard, nestled under his blanket. Her glossy auburn hair was sexily ruffled, perfectly framing her sweet face, blue-green eyes huge and inviting.
The tentative anticipation on her face always drove him wild; an expression encompassing a mix of innocent, sultry, nervous and eager. And her soft, pink mouth that made him think all kinds of wicked thoughts...
Rachel nervously licked her lips, and Ben lost his grip on the doorknob.
"Jesus Christ, Rae," he thickly muttered, urgently fumbling with his pants. "I fucking love you."
- COMMENTS
Anonymous2 months agoNeed more, this series has been the ultimate fantasy for me 😭 You have always been my favourite Lit author, all your stories are too good. Love how crazy Ben is for Rachel and how she never stopped thinking about him throughout her kidnapping. Honestly this could even be made into a movie (maybe would have to remove the sex), especially the stakeout at Ray's secret house and the car chase scene.
Fingers crossed that this series will have a sequel... Maybe Ray comes back for her and Ben becomes even more overprotective, taking her everywhere he goes...🤞
lsnid00312 months agoI really enjoyed this story, and offer this thought for some of the criticisms I see here:
1) This is fiction. Not real life. It’s not supposed to align with black and white thinking.
2) Rae’s character did what you are supposed to do in horrific situations. SURVIVE. She ,ace every effort to get away, and did the best she could in horrifying situations. All while in her first trimester of pregnancy whoch tota.ly messes with your ability to think coherently.
3) I kind of like that we don’t know for sure about Ray. If he is out there, I severely doubt his willingness,or ability, to stay away.
4) For the love of all that is good and right in the world, there truly isn’t a textbook case of all or nothing, black or white, all good or all evil. If that offends you, you are probably too delicate to read this genre. Toughen up, or go to romance novels. Allow me to enjoy the exploration of good and bad that Bellie444 writes so very well. While I do think there are absolutes in life, I also think most things are not this polarized.
You haven’t posted in a while, I truly hope all is well
eternalsunshine27about 1 year agogirl u r too good...so far i've read 3 of ur works n all of them so good....altho i felt the ending was a bit abrupt i was expecting some love making between ben n rae n a time leap of them with their child or smthng like tht anyways hope u can write maybe a bonus scene or maybe ray can come back uk ;)
WSM98over 1 year agoI have never been able to say this until now, but this is my most favorite story on Lit. Thank you & you're so very talented.
