All Comments on 'Voyeur Dream Pt. 01'

Thankfully it wasn't a cuck story. That alone scored it at least a 3.

It seems you left something out.. had potential but it didn't pan out.

Good descriptive writing. Continue with follow up chapters.

Oh, it will be a cuck story. Leads with "Wife tells husband she wants to watch him and another woman." Translation: Wife is actually planning to fuck around later, and this is the carrot on a stick, to suck him into her vortex of whoredom.

I like this story. It's obvious that you need the follow-on story, and I encourage you to do it.

Where's the ending? Does he get to have another woman? Please read over your stories lots of little mistakes that take away from the reading of the story.

Looking forward for Pt. 02