All Comments on 'Voyeur Night'

I loved the natural/real sense of the story. Really, I did... i even ignored the one thing that was eating at me through the whole story.. Typos/misspellings KILL a great story.. "Shi" for she... etc.. every writer, amateur or professional needs a great friend to trust & edit/proof a piece... find one... you have a gift... maximize it... get rid of the typo's

Any mans dream...

Great, believable story? Some people have a tenuous grip on real life.