All Comments on 'W & Little D Ch. 02'

by The_Technician

Sort by:
  • 4 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Great follow on chapter. I know I wouldn’t be entering that race not with that level of punishment for the loser, ouch!

Tess (uk)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This definitely seems reminiscent of the Monty's club from the last extended trip we took with W. I'm hoping for more!

DevilbobyDevilbobyabout 2 years ago

I'm looking forward to chapter 3.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

As the previous comments have said, this is an excellent story, but one anachronism rather grated. You stated this is in London, but then referred to "a one hundred pound note". There is no Bank of England £100 note, and Scottish Bank notes are not normally in circulation in London.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
userThe_Technician@The_Technician
I was born in the Midwest, but have traveled extensively throughout the United States and Canada. Currently I am full-time camping throughout the United States and Canada and spending my time writing for both fun and profit. Books with longer stories such as the kind posted on...

READ MORE OF THIS SERIES