All Comments on 'Wage Slaves'

by JukeboxEMCSA

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

funny story, thanks

Darth_FugueDarth_Fuguealmost 13 years ago
Needs "Closure"...

This story is awesome — a person who did NOT mind being hypnotized!

However, you need to have "Mr. Federer's" Trial, in order to wrap-up this story!

fanfarefanfareover 9 years ago
Soma indeed...

... I have never been a big fan of the 'Mind Control' genre. To me those stories mostly seem to combine wish fulfillment with Deus ex Machina. Tediously monotonous.

However, this story is funny and a biting satire of modern society. Yes, for us Deltas, to paraphrase Karl Marx "Mind Control is a benign opiate of the masses".

And the Murdochs of the World make sure we get our daily dosage.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Thoroughly entertaining.

This wasn't one of those humiliation-drenched surrender plots, which I reallly appreciate. The character interviewed was fresh, and had a more masculine attitude to things than the usual feminine damsel scenario.. Thanks for writing!

ContrarianContrarianover 8 years ago
Wow. Outstanding

Not only great satire, but a well rounded believable character in a page and 1/2.

Great work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
i can not stop laughing

usually I just lurk and mind my own business but this is the funniest fucking story ive ever seen on here.

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomealmost 5 years ago

Loved the way this turns the genre on it's head. Kudos.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

I've read this before, and I'm glad I found it again. It's pretty hot. I appreciate things the other commenters mentioned: humor, character development, trope subversion, etc., but I also find myself thinking how wonderful it would be to enjoy my job that much! Mind control and conditioning are dangerously tantalizing...

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