All Comments on 'Wait for Dessert'

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Nightowl22Nightowl22over 17 years ago
Good story

Pretty sexy but I didn't have a surprise as to what dessert was going to be. Now if she pulls a routine like that on their 25th wedding anniversary it'll really wow him!!

ChagrinedChagrinedover 17 years ago
Well done and erotic

This IS erotica. Very good submission. Keep it up!

Best Regards,

C

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Quaint Little Interlude..

WOW,What a vivid imagination The Author has just graced us with a sweet warm little erotic story. Such a pleasure to be allowed to get the feeling we are right there with the happy couple drinking in all the erotic scenery and the sexual goings-on. Gives new meaning to the word 'Dessert.'

Very enjoyable!

lorencinolorencinoabout 17 years ago
Love mingled with erotica

What a satisfying blend of mutual love and lust. Some erotic highlights of the story:

"Her body glistened as she cooked."

"Combined with how the food tasted I have never felt so much electricity."

"She lowered her sticky body down onto mine and my cock slowly entered her hot, wet pussy as her lips met mine."

I'm certainly careening over the edge.

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