All Comments on 'Wake Up Call'

by Quietmahoganystorm

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THELOVELY1GLO about 12 years ago

sweet and short, yet gets the point across of his undying love for his wife :>)

Alpha_Marm about 12 years ago

lovely

***** and sweet.

Madameblaque about 12 years ago

Beautiful story. Short, but sweet and to the point!!

Nightpleasure over 12 years ago

enjoyable story.

Anonymousover 12 years ago

Oh my gosh! I adsolutely LOVED your story. I was just "awwwing" through the whole thing. I'm still going awwww. :-)

Quietmahoganystorm over 12 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the feedback

Ok, so rehashing words from my first submission (anniversary) I may or may not continue Josephine & Jacob's story. I really like the love these two characters have for each other - they are a couple that's been together through careers, kids and life in general. I tried to show that through this update & hope I was successful at that. So far these two haven't said anything to me yet about a prequel, but I might if the fancy strikes me....

juicycaramel over 12 years ago

AWW :'o)

these characters r AWESOME!! their red hot passion is only surpassed by the true love they so obviously share! i wud LOVE 2 READ ANYTHING ABT THIS COUPLE...except a breakup ;o) JUST BEEAAUUTIFUL!!!