by Zack42
Great story;
"When You Wish Upon A Star" it could make your dreams come true. Anna Kendrick is a delight to read about, especially in this magical story. Very Hot!! I wish I were there. Hope the story goes on for several episodes.
And a good start. It could have gone longer, but the fuse is lit. Keep at it, there's promise.
I liked the emerging but this was just too short. Maybe I'm used to this length of set up or more and a sex scene, but this felt incomplete. Not that your writing is bad Anna seems like Anna, but it just felt incomplete.
really enjoyed it so far. would love to see you work up to maybe some bdsm or anal. anna is by far my favorite celeb