All Comments on 'Walking Home'

Soon and Often

I like to emphasize the latter comment

Eddiemulder@hotmail.com

It very nearly did (well at least the first part)and I'm not yet convinced that he won't still do it ;-)

Princess K xx

I thought it was a pretty hot story. One thing I noticed was that the gag was in, then out, then back in without anyone touching it (assuming she had to suck without it in her mouth). Try to clarify things like that, as it can throw the reader off a little to have things disappearing and reappearing in the story. Keep on writing, I look forward to reading more. :)

Just ask babe

Where are you? I'm sure it could easily be arranged

dear princes kiwi this was undoubtedly delicious great work

iwould be the one up her arse

Just saying if it was her fantasy would she really be allowing herself to not focus on the last guy fucking her? Also between the second and third guy you made it sound like they were both fucking her mouth and then when they came you made it sound like one was in her mouth and one in her cunt. I think you need to pay more attention to detail on what your writing. Still I liked your story, was rather interesting. ~dreamer

This was so fucking hot .. Believe me .. It's my fantesy too .. Now if only it would come true .

-Robyn

So hot. Wow. Excellent choice of pov.

Nice but needed more sexual content