All Comments on 'Walking with the Loa'

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stevieraygovanstevieraygovanover 15 years ago
Well, that was certainly different!

Different is good.<p>

Would that such spirits actually exist. Sure would love to run into a few Maddies under attack, every now and then.<p>

Well written story too. No complaints. Good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Very Enjoyable!

This was a fun take on a genre that seems to have so much of the same. I really enjoyed it. I certainly hope there's another!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
woah

Different and hot story in a very stale and cliche genre. in particular the 'walk in on friend masturbating' and 'low zipper with wet panties on the bus' scenes. Part two of the loa being naughty would be good.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
hot so hot

Talk about hot because that is what that is. MORE PLEASE

avoidfireavoidfirealmost 6 years ago
Please write more!

the first comment is from 2009 which is wild, it's almost been 10 years but I still somehow hope you write more. this was so good :(

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