All Comments on 'Wanda Homecoming'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
wanda homecoming

Dull start.

PugzillaPugzillaover 4 years agoAuthor
Can't all be winners

Yeah I see your point it was more of a story advancer than a solid chapter. Next chapter will probably be similar in that it's just meant to advance the plot.

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I am a 40ish male from the southeastern United States. My main focus is on crime/humor fiction. I have a couple of novels under my belt. I like to write short stories about my background characters to flesh out my literary world. I have recently taken up writing on Literotica ...