All Comments on 'Wanted: Waitress & Cumdump'

Love it.

In a world where most girls lose their virginity at 18, a virgin girl would go for a premium. It would not be given away in a job interview. She should have been able to get more money

Great start! More please.

Oh my god, so hot 🔥

Fics aren't as graphic as images/videos but they're better at diving into the psychology and thought processes of a character. The nice thing about this story is that it makes a commendable attempt at capitalizing on this with the "You can do this, Becky" internal monologue. It helps sell the reluctance. Good job.

Is it weird that i ship them now? Would love to see Becky&Frank more <3

We need a part 2!!

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Cash strapped girls that are ok getting knocked up by strangers and having to take care of a child for 18yr and still not having money to pay her bills? So sounds like a perpetual welfare cycle

Why did I click on this damn it? Very disturbing. Poor girl :( It felt almost like a rape scene. But I guess that's what some people get off on. Moving on...

Loved this! I'm so incredibly wet right now. Please write more of this storyline/situation.

He was so careless with her knowing it was her first time that I couldn’t get into it. He hurt her deliberately and then talked about “pink cream,” thinking it was funny she was bleeding. Yuck. For whoever said they ship them now. Obviously, Vicky’s belly wasFrank’s doing. How many other babies has he made and where are they? Are we really shipping her with someone who doesn’t care who he’s impregnating and will keep doing it? Yuck. I hope she doesn’t get pregnant for him ever. She can barely take care of herself, and he’s certainly not going to help her take care of a kid.