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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Sr

Loved it ❤️

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Total Load of Rubbish

I would not bother writing any more if this is all you can do

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Memories

Reminds me of high school. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Good buildup; climax/ending could use work

Overall i enjoyed the gothic element in the characters, though i do think it drifted away from that a bit. Climax and Ending seemed a bit rushed. With the gothic/emo characters, it really could use a dark tone.

tinman69stinman69sabout 17 years ago
Damn what a story!!

Oh you naughty girl!! What a story! It was as if I was there and being part of it all!!

I loved it !!!

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I promise I am working on more Daddy and Bunny. I did not expect it to be so well received and was not prepared. I am taking my time and not rushing so you feel like it is a worthwhile addition to their story.