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tinman69sabout 17 years agoDamn what a story!!
Oh you naughty girl!! What a story! It was as if I was there and being part of it all!!
I loved it !!!
Anonymousabout 17 years agoGood buildup; climax/ending could use work
Overall i enjoyed the gothic element in the characters, though i do think it drifted away from that a bit. Climax and Ending seemed a bit rushed. With the gothic/emo characters, it really could use a dark tone.
Anonymousover 11 years agoTotal Load of Rubbish
I would not bother writing any more if this is all you can do
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I promise I am working on more Daddy and Bunny. I did not expect it to be so well received and was not prepared. I am taking my time and not rushing so you feel like it is a worthwhile addition to their story.
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