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by Princess_Star

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LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 12 years ago
Ditto what anonymous said

its too generic. Base the bitchy boss on someone you know IRL & incorporate their quirks . Use the power plays of insensitive boss / employee relationship & you'll touch on a universal nerve.good luck!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
A good first start

Let the tension build in your stories. You show potential. Please continue

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