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by Princess_Star
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Anonymousover 12 years agoA good first start
Let the tension build in your stories. You show potential. Please continue
LordSlamdawggover 12 years agoDitto what anonymous said
its too generic. Base the bitchy boss on someone you know IRL & incorporate their quirks . Use the power plays of insensitive boss / employee relationship & you'll touch on a universal nerve.good luck!
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