All Comments on 'Wanting to be Wanted - Redux'

Excellent. Loved the motivation for the rewrites too. Didn’t know what a spinner was either.

@Anonymous - thanks for the +ve feedback, hun. Em

Loved the story! Well written, fun and very hot. The notes at the end are a a wonderful addition.

@Maydaypilot - thank you, I’m glad you liked it. I didn’t think many people would care about the endnotes, but you are the second person who has mentioned them. Em

Well, this was highly captivating. Once I had ample time to give it my undivided attention.

Fantastic writing. You tease, but get to the point always keeping me wanting more. I can’t wait to read your other stories. I also loves and appreciated the end notes.

First off is always nice to see my name used as an object of desire, even if he did end up being gay. Very well written. I enjoyed it. I write older women May/ December romances, it was nice to read the other perspective.

@robroy1968 - thank you for the feedback. Glad you liked it. Em

@ctarrantella - sorry had missed this. Thanks for the lovely feedback. Em

Glad I started here! Making my way to that troublesome turntable tale, but the first paragraph made me want to read from the beginning.

@djrip - thanks, hun. My first attempt at writing since college. It kinda shows, but I’m still proud of this. Em

Emily, I loved the story. 5 stars. I discovered you in the "Author Hangout", and now I have a new author to read.

Love the description of your breasts and David making love to you through your sensitive nipples was hot. As you can tell from my name... small breasts are my favorite.

Like your one comment, I don't consider myself to be all that imaginative in putting together a story, and rely on my own, somewhat limited experiences, with some extra stuff.

Keep it up. You have a nice style and flow to your story.

@32aa from AH 👋👋👋 - two AHers today, which is nice. Thank you for the lovely feedback. Us small girls need to stick together 😊. Em

Wow what a great story and well written.

Sorry I hadn’t found you sooner.

I look forward to reading more of your life stories.

@Beau47 - thank you for the kind words. Em

Confessions are good for the soul ... so they say. [And yes, I don't think anyone wants their real identity surfaced here.] Your story was well written, with some refreshing terms I've never heard. It was well done, so I gave it a five-star award. I could have had a little less on the anal, though. It seemed the exertion was too painful for me halfway through that part. Perhaps that's just me without any experience thinking aloud.

@dmallorrd - thanks for the kind feedback. I love anal, but I know not everyone does. Em

Emily is a must read writer on LIT. Her work is fresh, witty, and leaves you wanting more !!

Ha ha! Spinner is a funny term. Deary me. This story is funny, emotional, honest and very very hot, which I now need to do something about, ahem :)

@Anon - glad you liked it 😊. Em

Thank you for the story

@Jared427 - thank you for reading it 😊 Em

This felt so real and really spoke to me. 💗

@lavendersilk - thank you. It was the first story I wrote for Lit and my first creative writing since college. My style and technique has come on, but there is a bit of ingenue charm to WTBW. I’m still fond of it, typos and all. Em

Wow! What a fantastic voice you have! I couldn’t say who was more fortunate, Em with a caring, experienced older partner or David with an imaginative, curious, passionate young woman. This was well-written, with exciting sex scenes and a satisfying emotional fabric. Thank you!

Great story and very creative writing. I loved it and can't wait to read more of your work !!

@Catman1001 - first thing I ever wrote since college - my naive style shows, but it’s not a bad story 😊 Emily