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Mylo didn't stop. "But I gotta give you credit chief, every time that little slut gushes on my dick she says she is doing it for you. I mean that horny bitch even says it before she screams out my name in ecstasy. She's as loyal as they come. You're a lucky man Rawlins!"
The warden decided that further emotional displays were exactly what the psychopath desired, so he just stared at him through unblinking eyes. Inside, however Grant felt like a thousand daggers were stabbing him in the heart. He was obviously aware of his wife's propensity for ejaculation, but the thought of her doing it time after time on the huge cock of a detestable rapist was more than he could fathom. The indignant husband suspected the escapee was embellishing the story, but after sleeping in cum-covered sheets himself for the past several hours, it was hard to deny there was likely a lot of truth to his braggadocious rant.
The warden swallowed hard and wondered to himself how this detestable situation could possibly get worse.
It would...
To be continued...
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Author's note:
Please remember to vote and either comment or PM me. Make sure to include your email address if you want me to respond. I had originally planned on writing only two more chapters to this saga, but as you can probably tell, we have a ways to go. I can't say exactly how quickly I will publish each, but this continues to be my top priority and the wait between them shouldn't be too long.
- COMMENTS
JJsbbcaddiction12 months agoGreat story!! I find myself hoping to see Mylo fucking Liv in the ass in front of Grant to earn him a fentanyl!
Anonymousover 1 year agoExcellent news. I hope to read you soon again. One of the best stories so far.
My husband and I are loving it.
Cheers from France !
Anonymousover 1 year agoexcellent. Whilst you at it, can you work that same magic on thecryptkeeper and get her out of retirement?
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoExcellent story. As said before looking forward to the finish if possible.
underdog1almost 2 years agoGreat story but as someone else already stated nothing added in 18 months, seriously that sucks. What are readers supposed to do, start on the last page to make sure it has an ending before reading. Again, excellent writing and story line, but a bullshit way to leave it.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoA year and half since it was last updated. Unfortunate.
This is a great story. Among a handful on this site that is actually worth reading again. Usually, I don't like humiliation "cuckold" stories, but this one works because the husband is not a willing participant. So, the Warden parts are actually interesting.
However, Mylo is a bit ridiculous. One has to suspend disbelief about his sexual prowess: unless he's popping Viagra like M&Ms there is no way he's able to perform as he does and even then it'd be hard to believe. Plus, he's a one-dimensional villain. He's just plain evil without one redeeming personal trait. Surprised he doesn't have a mustache that he can twirl. Granted one doesn't read Literotica for fully-developed, believable characters, but still Mylo is puddle deep.
Liv, though, is an interesting character. Trying to protect her husband and herself by any means but having her booze/drug addled mind and sexualized body betray her in a humiliating manner. However, I think she would have worked even better if she was more demure, classy, and prim. Unfortunately, she comes across at times as a porno bimbo with an MD. Her having a teenage boy's wet dream of a body, trailer park lingerie/f***-me heels, kink box/pornos, and past drug use undermines the story of her forced degradation. That all reads like: "She was already sort of trashy, and Mylo is just making her really trashy."
If this story does ever get completed, then I hope we don't see that all-too common trope of non-consent stories: "My rapist made me orgasm multiple times so now I love him." Please, don't end it that way.
Despite the above criticisms, I still really enjoyed this story. I'm just far more critical on the stories I like than the ones I don't. Can't help but see ways (IMO) that they could be even better.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoI just tripped across this story via the random spin—a feature I really find useful, by the way—and found it so gripping that I read all the episodes in one sitting. The story was powerful, vivid and sexy. I would love if more episodes were available.
