by Hedocpl
Hoping this was a hedo in nedril experience. Wife and I have been there several times, and the bbc never seem to disappoint her.
It is work to create. It is easy to tear down. It looks like you have already done the basics of using spellcheck. Beyond that, write what turns you on. Speaking of which, 5 stars from me on two of your three stories. keep them coming.
5 big blazing stars. Pretty Hot Story. Great Effort, Great writing. Thanks, Buster2U
Love reading about a married white woman being converted as her husband watches it happen.
HOT... I remember my wifes first BBC... now she loves all cock, especially big ones, and several at a time!!
I am a PhD English and I have to say your work is some of the best I've read!! Great writing. Forget the naysayers.