All Comments on 'Was She or Wasn't She...My Daughter?'

with the repost???

Was this a mistaken repost, with the wrong file being submitted?

seems to have improved your score. I suggest you keep posting it until the cows come home, or it achieves 'hot' status. Is this a form of a chain story where the same link is posted continuously? I know Todd172, qhml1, and Oshaw will have something a bit more original in their chain story. Great work and full marks. 5 *s from me on this one every time you post it!

aMerryman

The repost didn’t score any higher this time around for me .

It was ok the first time, sucked the second time.

It's the same story. No apparent changes. It's still a screwed up situation. Probably harder on the kids than anyone else. The ending was, once again, not satisfactory.

What is with the reposting of the same story form a few weeks ago?

I liked the completely improbable twists and turns, but you clearly don't know a lot about blood group inheritence. Purely on blood groups it is entirely possible for Lois to be the mother of Betty if the father was blood group B. DNA results of course are much more specific and would indeed be able to positively assign parenthood, but the initial blood groups on the day of Betty's accident only show that Brian was not the biological father. This is a situation that occurs not infrequently in hospitals when families are tested and in many cases the results are likely to be overlooked as "none of our business" as long as the child/children are seen to be in a caring environment and no evidence of abuse or wrong doing is suspected.

So at least my comment is original. For what little it's worth.

Rare but healthy to find a cheating story that isn't overloaded with anger or culminating with vilifying payback. I hope I'm not alone--unfortunately, I'm sure I'll be in the minority--in being happy with your conclusion.

After all, your protagonist is happy. He clearly loved little Betty more than her 'mom', so why should a reader be unsatisfied if he gets both Betty and her real mom? Because Lois didn't suffer enough? Please. She was as faithful to her first husband Jerry as he would let her be. Sometimes in life we all serve as the Parenthesis. It was Brian's turn. But I'm glad this time he gets to finish out the sentence with the family he loves.

I'm afraid I can only go 4 stars though, because i don't see how you can own 5 successful restaurants in a town so small that everyone is as interactive as portrayed in this story. I also thought Brian should have been the grown up when he lost Betty--not Lois, that was fine--because she lost her daddy's love through no fault of her own (even though that might have spoiled the reunion, huh).

All in all, you navigated very well that narrow middle ground where cheaters don't get to be as happy as the saints they wronged but they do get to stay alive. Well done. Oh, hang it, let's go the full 5*.

Who reposted?....?

Glad things turned out well for Jerry. Not sure I could have tolerated being around a cheating slut like Lois. Those many years of lies and deceit would be tough to handle let alone actually having to again be in her presence. Why would anyone want to be around a person like that? Both Lois and her fb are just not very nice people. They are shallow and selfish. I wouldn't want the kids to be around them and I certainly would not want to be anywhere near either one of those lying, cheating jerks.

They both got off lucky. Jerry just moved on. No revenge on either the slit or her lover. Maybe that's closer to real life, I don't know. But again, why would you spend any time around them. That's just going a bit far. Maybe, maybe if enough time had passed, as in several years. But this was just way too soon after getting his life back together with Chris and the girls for him to be o.k. with the slut and her fb spending time with them.

Not a bad story, just have a hard time believing a guy would be alright with how it ended.

Well it was good before and it's still good now.

...or a competition who finds any differences between 1st & 2nd posting?

(no rating)

The doctor is wrong. A mother Type O CAN have a child Type B IF the father is Type B or AB. Since he's Type A, HE can't be her father, but his wife can certainly be her mother!

True, he doesn't own her, but she doesn't own HIM either, and if he doesn't want her after she's been with someone else, that's his choice.

Unless and until they resolve things, Betty is their daughter! The other parents aren't being asked to relinquish custody of THEIR daughter, are they?

I would have insisted on answers for the speed dial and kisses!

Again, why is the other couple allowed to keep the child that they think is their daughter?

I KNEW that Chris was going to be the "other" mother!

I don't know, I don't think I could be that cordial with Lois, and ESPECIALLY Jerry!

...are you torturing us with this wimp tale, AGAIN!?!?

choices galore.....all negative, TK U MLJ LV NV

I don’t understand why authors repost older stories... This was a good story, but other than to try to get more ‘new’ votes without the effort of a new story, it makes no sense to repost. Nothing significant was added to warrant the reposting.

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As at least one other commenter has noted, a parent with Type O blood can have a child who is Type A, Type B, or Type O depending on what the blood type of the other parent is. There are two types of Type A or Type B blood--A/A in which each parent is Type A or A/O in which one parent is Type A and the other is Type O. The same is true for B/B and B/O. I have a Masters in Biology, but I'll bet anyone can learn this through Google. It is a huge mistake to write about things you know noting about. You lost me as soon as I read the paragraph about the blood types. 1* for laziness.

Specifically, "Unless and until they resolve things, Betty is their daughter! The other parents aren't being asked to relinquish custody of THEIR daughter, are they?"

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Agreed. There have been several cases of babies switched at birth. If anything, it's often hard for them to be switched back because of the disruption to the children. All they know is that they are being taken away from the only parents they know, and often the courts decide keeping that continuity for the children is the paramount concern.

I don't care what everyone else is getting riled up about but this story is not an erotic story.

If I've read a reposted story before I automatically deducted 1*; especially if there is no big changes/ revisions noted.

for repost; 1/3 star for not knowing blood types; 1/3 star for not beating the living fuck out of red riding hood. That's a solid 1* Try again.

I started reading this and realized that I had already read it and was hoping that a repost would have had a different ending.

But, nope the same story of a cheating bitch becoming the "loving aunt".

Cheating two days before the marriage is one thing but, continuing to cheat the entire marriage was just too much for me. I don't see the husband wanting to share any time with a cheating ex and including "uncle Jerry" in their family life is way too much. Will Jerry be hitting on Chris next?

Men age like wine, women age like cheese. Jerry is a selfish shallow unethical bastard, who took Lois back because she is a selfish shallow soulless bitch. Lois will age quickly and poorly, as evil people tend to do. Jerry will be fucking around on Lois before she hits 50, probably before she hits 40. Lois will spend her middle life on to her death in guilt and regret. She will pour whatever resources and energy she can manage into Jackie's life, but it will never be enough. Lois will hate herself for abandoning Brian, then hate herself for abandoning Jackie, then hate herself for reconnecting with the complete asshole who is Jerry. She will start drinking again until she kills herself, on purpose or by accident. Jackie will appreciate the inheritance, but she won't give a second thought to the woman who abandoned her. Good riddance.

I liked this story when it was first posted.

I liked this story the second time it was posted

I will like this story when I reread it at some point in the future.

Were there things wrong with this story? My answer there is always something wrong in every story, how big of a deal someone wants to make of it is all on the commenters. BaMuoiBa you keep writing and I'll keep reading.

Why would he let Lois and Jerry back into his life? It beggars belief.

I do not know if I like it or not, did not rate it.

I don't see a guy having a relationship,sharing his family, with a woman that cheated on him their entire marriage. Definitely not with the masters she cheated with either.

You lost me almost immediately. If a woman with type "O" blood conceives with a man with type "B" blood she has a 75% chance of having a type "B" child (50% if he's b/o and 100% if he's b/b). I've known this since I was 7 but they teach it in 10th grade biology. A little fact checking please.

Still lame second time around!

of an old story word for word

I only wish I could live up to the husbands standards, that way I could go through life conveniently situated as a doormat.

strong male and female character, almost impossibly so.

these two cheaters gave up their rights to be doting parents, and even friendly aunt/uncle with their disrespect/deceit. They'd only cause hurt to the children with the truth and heartace to the main fem/male couple as a constant reminder of their lying and selfish disregard of others.

The problem is that his behaviour does not fit that of most people. They feel that violence and hate are a really necessary part of everyday living. I imagine that this will score poorly since it does not stroke people's prejudices.

Talk about a paradoxical twist of fate. Pretty cool tale.

I enjoyed reading your story. It was different from most and had meaning in its telling. It is my first reading of your stories and I will check out the others. Thank you.

And i feel generous.

Sorry the story doesnt make sense to me. I get the anger, betrayal and sense of loss of Brian, im somewhat the fact that loose his daugther "twice" but the whole legal debacle doesnt make any sense like many reviewers point before, yes the biological parents have rights, but also the "foster" parents specially when this whole debacle was the result of a disgruntled employed, that without say that each child have its own represantive that must figth for the wellbeing of the girls, the end was beyond of any posibility. Jerrey and Lois are a pair of selfish individuals, one of them put her own daugther up to adoption almost the same day in which she got... what a bitch.

Passed over this story at first due to the low rating, but then I remembered those don't mean everything and gave it this a read. I didn't really like it, but it was an interesting read.

Nothing in the beginning of this story is grounded in reality. First, bad 'medical', then bad law and I stopped reading.

There is google, you don't need to make up malarkey.

I strongly disagree with allowing Lois and Jerry anywhere near the children or the family.

1-Betty should be separated from the women who didn't love her enough to care for her when she was her child. And she gave her up for adoption at 5 years old when she learned Betty wasn't her biological daughter.! She will be an impediment as Christine tries to establish herself as Betty's true and only loving mother.

2-Lois is a threat to Jackie. Being her biological mother, Lois may, over time, attempt to have more influence in her life. Additionally, Betty will feel betrayed if Lois, who acted as her mother for 5 years, shows favoritism toward Jackie.

3-Having Lois or Jerry around frequently can only serve to remind Brian of the deceit, disrespect and sham associated with his marriage to Lois and what a low life Jerry is. The best situation for him is a complete severance of all communication with both of them.

4-The girls should not be exposed to the likes of both Jerry and Lois, two totally deceitful, lying, utterly selfish people. They are role models for everything that Chris and Brian would not want their children to become.

The author exhibits a utter lack of understanding of human relations by ending the story with Auntie Lois and Uncle Jerry being part of Brian's family.

Not at all what i was expecting but our hero handled the multiple 'situations' about as well as could be expected. Please ignore the trolls and continue to write and share - thanks.

So Jerry gets first prize and no punishment and Brian accepts like a wimp.At the time of the disclosure he didn't know he would end up with Chris.A real man would have put his army training to good use.

What happened? No legal action against the Hospital (I might have missed it! ..but don't kick this dog..I Bite!? Ha ha ha) Oh back to the story!...You Betchem I thoroughly enjoyed the Story ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ WOOF!

Jerry Springer, Oprah Winfrey, Ellen Degeneres. Would have loved to have this on their Show! Ellen & Oprah would have given them a car & house "You Gotta love those Two Ladies"! See Ya

Well played, plenty of plot twists, and couldn’t see most of them coming. The unknown sperm donor? No way to see that coming. When Chris finally said she had kids, it gave away that Brian would see Betty soon... but sometimes you can’t hide the plot twists. I just think Brian was too forgiving to Lois, too soon. Keeping the girls away would have been cruel to Betty, But still, Brian should not have had to endure Jerry’s presence at all.

The hospital basically committed kidnapping. Their setting themselves up as the arbiter of the situation was insane, and would have ended with them being sued for millions of dollars for that, on top of the lawsuit over the baby-switching. No sane hospital would ever do that; they'd simply sit back, tell the parties involved to fight it out in family court, and until then, whoever's on the birth certificate is the presumptive legal parent.

The idea that Lois' real daughter would have been taken away from her parents and put up for adoption (but, hey, at least her parents had the inside track on that!) is just mind-numbingly moronic.

Here's how it would have played out:

* Betty would have gone home with Lois and Brian

* The hospital would have been sued over the baby switch, with a good chance of the switched kids splitting a million or so dollars

* Lois could have sued for custody of Jackie, but wouldn't, so nothing would have changed for Jackie

* Chris and her husband could have sued for custody of Betty. If Brian and Lois were staying together, it's pretty unlikely they would win (but might get visitation), because of a strong presumption against disrupting a child's life like that. However, since Brian and Lois were divorcing, it would have been a free-for-all for custody between whoever out of Brian, Lois and Chris&Jack wanted her, and really anyone's ballgame.

The middle section, where the exposition fairies spell out everything Brian needs to know, was incredibly blatant and bad writing.

The ending, where Lois and Jerry are loving aunt and uncle to the kids is nonsensical. I have trouble grasping the degree of ballessness necessary for that outcome. I've never really understood the "This person is a sack of shit with a moral code I find repugnant. I definitely want them to be involved in raising my children!" mindset.

It's hard to feel sympathy for the husband.

Brian knew Lois was a slut when he was dating her... he caught her with someone else and she admitted to fucking the other guy. Did he really expect her to stay faithful when she got married? The dumbass should have walked and never looked back.

But he didn't...

So she got herself knocked up by some random nameless cowboy (classy!), duping Brian into raising another man's bastard. Then she cheated on Brian constantly throughout his entire marriage.

After betrayal heaped on betrayal, there is NO WAY, he would ever speak to her again, aside from profanity laden tirades. However, we're supposed to believe that he forgives her and even lets her be a prominent part in his kids lives? Come on... no one is that forgiving! Even Jesus would have told the bitch to go fuck herself.

The story is a bit of a roller coaster. For Brian Jerry and Lois you take turns feeling sympathy and contempt for all three. Brian spends most of the story acting like a hurt Schoolboy and is selfish enough himself that he can't say goodbye to the little girl who knows him as her daddy. Lois's actions speak for themselves, and she at least thinks of her birth daughter's well-being before her own. Indeed she would not have been a good mother. At the end of the second page I did not know how to feel about the story but by the end of it I thought it was exceptionally well brought together. Kudos

i m glad that the little girl got her daddy back she didn t deserve all the shit thrown her way

once again a cheater prospers and i hate when they do so you get 1 tiny little star

And I enjoyed most of it. Right up until the ending. No way in hell should Lois and Jerry be allowed to be near either one of those kids. Brian needed to nut up and make sure that they aren’t. Not buddy up with the two idiots.

I read this a second time to see if it was as bad as it was the first time......worse.

Although an interesting read, I could not accept the action od the characters esp the ending.

I really liked the story, concept and content. I was however disappointed by the ending. I feel like Lois and Jerry should have paid a much higher price for their dishonesty.

I usually enjoy your work, but not this time. Pretty fanciful story in all respects, but the ending goes beyond fairytale. No way you have cordial relationship with cheating wife and.her lover. No way!

Not realistic ending.

No way would be ever be around his ex again and definitely never jerry.

Expose your kids to cheating lying people with no morales..

Nope.

"Uncle Jerry"? Nope, you can fuck right off with that shit.

Screwed ending

...screw uncle Jerry and the Lamborghini he rode in on.

I know a woman who has three children by her husband's three brothers. And four brothers who have had sex with each of their brother's wives. The women have several children in total, but only one was actually a product of husband and wife. And I know a woman who has children by a father and son. And she had married first the son, then his father and back to the son. And I know a man who is raising his cousin's son. If these relationships can work, surely the one described here can work.

If anything deserves a "Fag Cuck Shit", tag, this one does.

I don’t think I could be civil to either of these horrible people. She used him for her own ends without any concern about his feelings or well being. If the girl hadn’t been injured how long would she have continued with her deception or would it have taken to seek divorce, if ever?

It all ends too easily for me. I think he would want closure not being reminded every day how the bitch treated him.

I think an epilogue where Jerry has a crash and is left impotent and in a wheelchair would be good to see how the bitch deals with that.

Lois should have been made to pay. What a slut. She screws three different men just before her wedding and gets off scot free. To make it worse she gets to be "Aunt Lois" later. I would have backed the car over here a few times. Then throw her off a cliff. What a skank

fuck lois and fuck jerry

Lois' parents sure, they werent cheating fuck sluts who abandoned their children the moment things got tough

Aunt Lois? No, she can be Ant Lois so Brian can step on her once and for all.

Jackie, when old enough, finds out who her mother is and then has nothing to do with her.

Other mom's last comment as she left was "We really hope to see you and the girls again, Chris. Please?"

Chris nodded. "I'm sure that can be arranged."

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Of course Lois wont be part of that arrangement, she cheated on me hundreds of time before and during our marriage and she legally abandoned both her daughters

If I ever see her within 100 yards of either of MY daughters you will never see them again

Are we clear?

All pretty civil considering.

With what she did. Why does the woman cheater seem to get away scot free for most of these stories.

But Jerry?

Jerry'd be buried.

5*

This wasn’t a BTB, but somehow seemed to be how real life should be if the adults had the kids interests at heart...I think anyway

your whore wife cheats through out your marriage. Has no remorse and after everything you divorce her and find it easy as fuck to raise her kid with the guy she cheated on you with.

Lois would be lucky to get a Christmas card from Betty each year. Why expose kids to two horrible people like them.

I started to read your tale and was intrigued by the plotline. I know this type of situation has arisen in "real-life", so I was curious as to where you would take it. Truthfully, I did not warm to the characters of Lois and Jerry...that's putting it mildly. My own feeling towards Lois is that if she admittedly did not see herself as a mother, why the fuck would she be any different as an "aunt" ?!!!!!! As far as the red car - addicted lawyer Jerry....meh. Both Lois and Jerry were portrayed as extremely shallow individuals with very few redeeming qualities. The "reconciliation" at the end was so false and schmaltzy, I thought It was taken from the Disney channel!

Excellent story ruined in the last paragraph. Jerry invited into their lives, seriously the guy fucking his ex-wife during their entire marriage invited into the lives. Sad ending to an otherwise excellent story.

Great story dont leave the true readers hanging6

These stories are fantastic but like others have put we need more. You are a very talented writer and I like others have put we need more stories especially from a talented writer like you. Please stop hiding your talent and show how good you really are.

Good story BUT, someone should have kicked Lois's Ass, Cheating BITCH

Another gem of a story rated to low. A Rubic's cube story that is easy to follow, but has lots of twist. Quite a unique DNA genre LW's tale.

Best of all, a nice ending. *****

The most complex story ive read here. Excellent. 5

if you get passed the likelihood of the coincidence and just enjoy the story and go with it, well written

I read a story where a man found "his" child wasn't really "his". For some reason the biological father either couldn't be identified or he couldn't be found. He may even had been dead. The main character in the story had been the only "father" the child could identify with. He sought a divorce from his cheating wife. But the courts made him financially responsible for the child. About the same time I read that story, I heard that several states place the financial burden of raising such children not on the biological father or mother, but on the man who had "accepted" that responsibility when the child was born.. This just doesn't seem right.

Here comes Rod Serling

Great story, really enjoyed it.

Great story, a great read and I enjoyed it

Why would you ever invite the cunt Lois and the sleezebag lawyer to lunch much less even let them come close to the children? Unless you wrote this for all the cucks out there. 1 star

Agree with other why have anything to do with Chester's

Stupid ending to a poor story! If I could give it negative stars I would.

Why? It was a coincidence that his new wife had adopted his old wife’s daughter. His choice was to either accept that, and be the daddy to the daughter he had reared and bonded with, and the woman he loved, or abandon a woman he loved, the daughter he feared, and Lois’s biological daughter. It wasn’t the kid’s fault!

The main character proved himself to be a real man.

The last part about Aunt Lois and Uncle Jerry seemed contrived, and, in the end, Lois’ biological daughter is going to have some serious questions.

I wouldn't let the kids anywhere near "Uncle" Jerry.

Bullshit! What a pussy! Why would he let "Uncle Jerry" or that cheating whore anywhere around his wife or those kids? God, what a waste of a story!

Cheated out of any biological children, fated to constantly see the man who. I molded him, constantly the only one in the foursome whose genetic legacy hit a dead end. The ultimate cuckold.

In the second to the last line of the story, Brian and Chris has twin boys. They are "Aunt" Lois' "nephews" that she stakes claim to.

Personally I would have liked to have seen Jeff and, especially, Lois to have been punished, a bit more. Not BTB, but, some kind of payback for the deception they wrought on Brian. If it had that I would have given it 5 stars instead of 4.

Still, overall, a very good read.

Well you two cheated during the whole time but I not only forgive but welcome you both into the family. What a crock of shit.?!?!!

jtwheels

Very well done!

I hated the ending. The MC was such a pussy. Why in the world would you even speak to the slut, much less let her into the children's lifes? That's just asking for trouble. You could let the maternal grandparents see the children on Sundays. However, he should have told the bitch and loverboy to get back into the Ferrari and drive away. She gave up her daughter for adoption so she has no right to try to see the child. She whorred around the entire marriage. So she has no right to try to talk to the MC. He needed to tell her to fuck off and wash his hands of her. It wouldn't hurt to let everyone know just what a slut she is also. If any guy would actually do what this character did; he needs to turn in his man card, hug a tree, and then go eat a creampie.

what is the point of making a comment when all these stories are fiction?

Constructive criticism might assist the author in making some changes in the next story and that might make them better to read. This story was relatively easy to read but the content was more than a bit unrealistic and not believable. The main male character should have been a whole lot angrier than depicted in this story and there should have been a whole lot of anger directed at the cheating bitch. It has been my experience that anything remotely like this story would have created a whole lot more anger than this tepid story displayed.

Not too sure how good an influence their new aunt and uncle could be, considering their morals in general, but whatever floats their boat.

I wouldn't let Jerry get within 50ft of the girls. For almost 6yrs Jerry & Lois cuckold Brain. Nah, they are trash and need to stay that way. Jerry earned a 'red' baseball bat haircut and scrotum message and with hopes Jerry could never perform again leave Lois forever frustrated to dildos only!

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Other Grandparents, had a granddaughter plus one. Brain, Chris, kids and grandparents were victims made whole. From a legal point Lois was lucky she got what she got, as she was a legal nothing. But you know eventually Jackie will be told and by then we can hope Jackie will banish Lois from her life.

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3*, Hooyah

Very original, but the reconciliation with the adulterers was revolting and implausible.

I don't know how to rate this. It is well written. The characters where believable and though the situation stretched credibility, I thought the lead character whimped out at the end. He was previously likable and sympathetic. It would have been much more satisfactory if "Uncle Jerry" had become castrated in the wreck of his red car.