All Comments on 'Watching Each Other'

The story was pretty hot. It got me off. Except the end part. It's trying to be sweet but it's just weird and kinda ruins the mood. Other than that it’s good. I like the details about the actual masturbating. The feelings, the visuals, the dialogue even. Well done.

You have a talent for descriptive writing. It is very, very good. Not as arousing as it could be in my opinion because the dialogues seem trite. "Well, well. What have we here, " is a good example. A teasing remark, no doubt, but not natural in my view. A more provocative comment would have spiced up the dialogue. Nonetheless, that is a matter of personal taste, as a disinterested critic I gave your contribution five stars because it is a first-rate effort. I hope you make more contributions.