All Comments on 'Watching the Storm Roll In'

That brings back very fond memories, more please!

What a sweet story!

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Yaaaaaawn... What? Story over? Didn't know it began.

For next time, prone is lying face down. I think you meant supine. It was a good description of the layout and that made the sex part believable. It almost made the talk of the party redundant. Perhaps if they had had a fight on the way there and this was makeup sex or something, otherwise it almost lacked something.

Good story!

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Putting anything alcoholic on your pussy lips sounds less than ideal. Very illustrative writing, story telling is a part i can see you're very good at but perhaps you aren't making a story board before you start writing? It can help a lot with structure. Beautifully written nonetheless.