All Comments on 'Water Faire Ch. 01: The Dolphin Rides'

Still it was a bit disturbing tbh, I think what bothered me was that not all dominants are so careful. I loved that the slaves weren’t all cliched *pain sluts*, far too many writers have that as a baseline and an use it as excuse to inflict very harsh scenes or punishments.

The quality of your writing is exceptionally high for this website, the characters are realistic and relatable.

Thanks for sharing.

Tess (UK)

Loved it.

You should of capitalized the names of the slaves, even if they are just aliases. It is a bit confusing.