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DevilbobyDevilbobyover 3 years ago

Loved it. But too short, also I think Herr Dunkler is not a nice man and would hate him to be in charge of any machine that could harm my Precious. He should drummed out of the Faire Operators Guild and banished from the society, but then, no story. Hey ho, you win some, you lose some - great story though.

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I was born in the Midwest, but have traveled extensively throughout the United States and Canada. Currently I am full-time camping throughout the United States and Canada and spending my time writing for both fun and profit. Books with longer stories such as the kind posted on...

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