All Comments on 'Watersports with Daddy'

Work on your punctuation and grammar. I assume you're not a native English speaker as some of the structure is odd. Maybe get someone to help translate so your stories do not read awkwardly as run-on sentences and mis-jointed thoughts.

I am English and do not need help to translate as its my first language but I do appreciate the feedback and will check my work and thoughts more thoroughly in future in order to make it more pleasant for the reader

Short but very hot.

I appreciate the aftercare addition!!!!! I don't see that as often as id like tbh so thank you <3