All Comments on 'Waves'

Wow! That was quite a ride! I wasn't particularly titillated but you still managed to write something that captured my attention from beginning to end. That impresses me more than if I had been turned on, tbh. You really have a talent for storytelling!

im so jealous of Jennifer! This was incredible!

If this is your first story, you do well. I look forward to more writings from u. Thank u

Great short, I hope there's more to come!

Can I admit that I enjoyed this as much as Jennifer. If only she could watch herself as I did during her journey to blisblivian.

Thank you! I'm working on a second story, in a completely different and more developed setting, but incorporating similar kinks. Hopefully up in a few days, dialogue is trickier than monologues to give a "natural" feel to. Stay tuned!

So horrifying and arousing at the same time... very good job

Very well written. Thanks for posting

Delightfully demented torment.