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by dominatio

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traci_eliottraci_eliotover 13 years ago
Hot and well-written

A nice story, thank you. If I have any complaint, it is that you didn't give yourself enough time to properly develop your characters; what you did write was very good. 4 *s.

traci

estragonestragonover 13 years ago
Good writing, good concept

but I wish I knew more about the characters.

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