by Thors_Fist
I thought Ch 11 was “second to last”, then Ch 13 came along and I was sure that was a natural break point. Now Ch. 14!. Woo.
First time thru. . . . SAM is the star of this show. I like it. Away from MARCIA, he is showing his more dominant and male side. Plus, you are focusing on moving this story forward. Although I know. . . .DEAR AUTHOR your reader is in suspense, what is the deal with CHANTELLE ? 5 stars.