All Comments on 'WBDP - Caribbean Cruise'

took the better part of 4 days to finish... no previous comments?

well done.. lots of exposition, but that seems to be your style and makes sense

for the viewers...

so what next?

and good luck

keep the writing coming

and i will stay reading

You should keep Sam and Marcia telling this great story

What about the baby

Thanks for the good story.

Thank you, this series is one I really enjoyed :)

I almost didn't read them as most whip the wife/submissive etc stories go to far for my tastes with pain inflicted and what not, but the high score on them got me interested and Im glad I did, It was a love story.

Shame this is the end as I was interested in how you would write about how Sam and Marcia handles the move and the relationships with the harem when its not "little slave" time but husband and wife time for most of the month

Again

Thank You

I found the entire series to be fantastic. This is the first time I have gone back and committed but I found I had to do so. I also ask that the story continue because it is such a great series.

If it was written by lawyers of the caliber he could afford, and he tries to do that, she will get what is specified in the original plus damages if she sues him

It is a freaking CONTRACT and cannot be unilaterally changed by one of the parties

That’s the whole PURPOSE of a Pre-Nup

Aside from that - Great Story

I really enjoyed the story. It was well written and engaging. Thanks for putting in the time and effort to make it so good. I can tell you enjoy writing and as good as the sex is, the story was as good or better. The comment from the guy about the prenup is so focused on the wrong things. Probably a sexually deprived and frustrated lawyer.

By now you probably know how much I like this storyline, including the follow ups post babies, but rereading this got me thinking 'What happened with Sandy and Grant?' Might make a good spin off series....

this was an incredibly engaging story. thank you for taking the time to wrap up all the loose ends. all 35 pages in a single day and worth it.

The WBDP series has to be by far the best adult thing I've ever read. It deals with D/s in such a positive way, the writing is excellent and the story is beyond engaging. Aside from a few minor (and I stress minor) grammar issues my ocd self noticed, it's flawless. Thank you for writing this saga. It's been an amazing read so far and I still have the Brianna Delivers parts to go. All I can ask for is more

What a terrific story this is and remains to be.

The sex is wonderful, the dialogues and the monologue interieur even better and Sams deliberations are so respectful. And then there is even room for humour, made me laugh.

You just had me wondering after having read "I pulled out my phone and showed her the picture of her husband with the mustache from the article five years ago and pictures of Tom Selleck in 'Magnum, PI" and 'Quigley Down Under". From where did Sam pull his phone? (Since they were on the ship and stark naked.)

Thanks a lot.

What kind of freaking story is this? Who the hell are these people? No information about them? age, what they do, etc?

WELL YOU WENT AN WROTE A NOVEL IN 5 CHAPTERS, AND POSTED IT ALL AT ONCE IN ONE.

WOW!

First time thru. . . .BRAVO ! What fun ! Marvelous addition to the other stories in the WBDP SERIES. Did not get much sleep. Had to read about EVELYN submitting to BILL. DEAR AUTHOR, you did not disappoint. I do tend to get lost with your very long paragraphs. Those I skim. 5 stars.

After reading the Beth Wilson stories and the tales of the Rivers' this fills in a lot of blanks for me. I do wish I hadd started with the WBDP stories first as it would have given me a better idea of who the Thornhills were and how they relate to the overall world you have built. VIewing these stories as prequels is still good and gives me many "AHA!" moments. I am looking forward to the baby(ies) to come. FIve big gold stars.