by CrackedChaos
I really hope we don't have to wait too long for more of this story. I'm totally hooked.
That was extremely well written, I hope to see the next submission very soon.
Great start; just one comment: hair can be the color of cornsilk (pale yellow), but not cornflowers, which are blue. ; ) Just sayin'
That's funny...I never realized that and I was pretty sure I meant corn silk but combined two different things lol
Thanks for the heads up!
I must have been reading a lot of NonHuman lately -- cornflower blue hair was fine with me, until I realized Taylor was human. :) Anyway, wonderful job -- I'm going to read ch. 2 right now, I can't wait to see what happens next! Definitely will favorite this.
If Twilight were to have sex... I imagine it would be like this.
There IS a color that is yellow for cornflowers. I Google searched "cornflower yellow" and it turns out that there are even paint colors called "cornflower yellow". Just saying...
I just pictured a blonde. 5 stars, loving it. Moving on to chapter 2.
You get 5 of 'em. Especially for setting the story in Indiana. Not enough people know how perfect that state is for weirdness. :D Undead in Indiana? Yes. I can believe that. Hoosiers can put up with it.