All Comments on 'We Initiate a Virgin'

So gentle with her. She will always cherish this first time. I came.

Andrew

Lovely story, beautifully written. Any chance for part 2?

Erotic writing and nice style. 5 stars. From one author to another, let me suggest that you try writing from the point-of-view of the most reluctant participant in your next story. This is usually the woman. By so doing, the story brings in the thought process of hesitation, shy at first, being won over and then wanting more. It adds a new dimension. Just a suggestion!