All Comments on 'We Need to Stop This Ch. 02'

Your words wrap themselves around me as warmly as these sisters wrap their arms around reach other. Not sure where the next chapter is going, but I'm certainly pleased to be taking the journey with you. (Just wish you hadn't capitalized the "N" in north! We all need a little criticism, right?)

Thanks, Brandie69, for another great story. You're right, these are setting up as terrific stand-alone short stories, and I'm curious to see how things will get tied together or if it's just a theme that's doing so. Keep them coming.

I saw that capital "N" today and I thought, "did I do that? That's not right."

I knew you would catch it :)

B

Around "reach" other? I need a proofreader for my comments!

I enjoy your writing, lil lady. I look forward to more in this realm. Thank you.

I was expecting this to pick up where the other left off. But I'm curious to see how you tie all this together. Gave it a 5. I enjoy reading your work. Don't worry about the typos. I didn't notice it until a previous comment pointed it out. Keep writing, I'll keep reading!

...I'm thinking this was the right family to adopt me. Why does that always happen?

...why do your words have such an effect on me? Perhaps because they paint a vivid erotic picture and drive me crazy. So good, so ready for more!

Beautifuly written and wonderful love story.. your words are very arousing

A well written sensual, intimate love story. One twin is self-aware, self-assured, confident eith a solid ego and id. The other twin is ashamed of what she wants and unable to find it. Sheappears to have more than her shareof self-doubt, guilt, self-doubt and to a slight degree self-loathing on which she reflects on her past sexual partners.