by tennesseered
Myra gets her way in everything it appears. Seems like the doctor needs to take a firmer hand or just dump her whore ass.
I read TennesseeRed's other series first. If I had started with this one, I probably wouldn't have continued past Chapter Two. But whatever else you think, no one can accuse TR of writing "same old same old." His stories are well-written, and go in multiple different directions, with his characters (gasp) doing things *I* wouldn't have done! And if his characters aren't always consistent or unconflicted or righteous -- well, how consistent and unconflicted and righteous is real life?
It's good Myra the whore miscarried. Would she change now ? Since her hubby who she loves so much (lol) is dicklessđź‘Ž. Don't think so, mc should have retaliated much earlier and set her straight or divorced that conniving bitch
a nasty story about a selfish enttiled bitch and a husband who is a nice guy but too soft
What.
The.
Fuck.
Loaning out your wife for a threesome with your best friend and his brother? Rsising his fucking kid? GTFOH. Total waste of time.
Story was interesting and well written. Seemed to me that a lot of these people were successful losers, so, prolly democrap voters. Didnt like nobody in this story by the end, all selfish narcissistic AHs. Hopefully wont forget to never read this again. Have to wonder if rich(dominant ) was actually a good cop, dell was obviously a disappointed unrealized cuckold which is why he let himself go to fat and drink, claire was a slut, myra was a manipulating evil slut. By the end i only admired sharon cuz not enuf of her to know if she was likable. 2*s. rk
UNRESOLVED!
Myra's sex cravings, sex with Rich at house, preplanning fucks fest, and not made clear to her that she put Del in a no win position.
The ending was incomplete.
Good handling of Del's earlier concerns.
Was kind of hoping Newton would show up and shoot the lot of them. Alas only Dell got a bullet but nothing major. Story ended up turning out to be nothing but a cuck and a slutwife with supporting cast.
Boy this story went downhill FAST after the first few chapters. The characters completely morphed from what they were like in the first few chapters. Dell went from wanting to fight to save his marriage and keep his wife his to a cuck that can't fight or even protest when his wife wants something. Myra went from being a bored wife and wanting a divorce so she can fuck a predator, to content and wanting her marriage when the predator was revealed to be nothing but a sleaze, to superslut that wants to fuck other people and have threesomes and gangbangs. What the fuck man? Definitely a journey I'll say that.
Technically a very well written story. Regarding the story line. There are those who would say any story that makes the reader knash his teeth and scream is a success. This story is a success. If you want to read about a wife putting her loving husband through the wringer, with the help of hubby’s best friend be my guest
The first parts of this story were excellent
But this last part was a let down for me unfortunately
It’s like you rushed it to get it finished and out of the way