All Comments on 'We Should Do This More Often'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Wham Bam

Short and Sweet, pretty hot, too.

The story went a little too fast for me, though, and would be more erotic with more build-up.

You are a good typist, to have so few typos, but there are several that a good spell checker, or another proof-reading, would have found.

Stay with it, and thanks!

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
sweet words

and a sizzling tale.

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