by Lingerielover1434
Your story brought my minds eye back when I too was that age with my first love. My, how time flies, but I really enjoyed my memories, and also your story too!
it was great but my mom's name is Hazel so it kinda ruined it for me at the end but other than that, great story.
Great story! It was Like as it happened to most of us! Well written! 4 stars!
great because its how it was for many of us. its great to be able to look back n laugh n smile at your first time!
Was it "Advent Children" or "The Spirits Within"?
I love how it had true events & cuteness in it too. Please keep writing ! :)
Good start, I like true stories, you did very well describing the events leading to and the lose of your virginty.
Keep writing.