by jroseemi
Omg, Daniel is such an unlikable character! Isn't there a bus somewhere that's waiting to run him over? Daniel notwithstanding, it was great to see these characters back again for another story in spite of that initial gut punch that came from Kali's very sad passing. I'm looking forward to getting to know Diego and to finding out where this story is goes from here.
I'm so happy - Lenox twins are back!!! 😀 Unfortunately, Zach's life turned around completely. He is not playboy anymore but lucky father of beautiful baby girl. Diego coming to scene means not only good for little princes but for Zach's broken heart too. I'm hardly waiting to see how their relationship is going to develop!
Off Course, nothing without Daniel! He is like pest; he leaves damage wherever he interferes!
Happy that the twins are back! Still hate Daniel's ass haha. Diego sounds like an interesting guy. Looking forward to the progression of the story
Great story so far except..
There is honestly no reason for Daniel to still be in their lives. So what if Brielle, who is Brixton’s sister, would like them to. He is not their responsibility. There are douchebags he could hang out with and probably had been in the years since he dumped Zayne. And Zach and Elias don’t even like Daniel enough to hang out with him. Daniel, also appears to not like them either. And why tf would Zach ever talk to someone who speaks of his daughter the way Daniel does? You’re a better writer than this, using Daniel as a character to cause conflict or tension in this new storyline.