by jroseemi
The beginning of another FANTASTIC story. Your ability to develop all the nuances and depth of your characters is truly magical. This is one of maybe 2 or 3 stories that can’t wait for the next chapters to post.
So, that title has a totally different meaning now! That MS diagnosis is certainly devastating news especially on top of Kali's death in chapter #1, but it could have been far worse if Diego hadn't insisted on Zach seeking a second opinion. Speaking of which, I hope Zach lets Dr. Mitchell know how seriously ill he is and points out that the lazy one is the one who didn't run all of the tests that were necessary. As serious as this is, Zach is lucky in one respect, he has a strong support group around him that includes not only a strong role model for dealing with adversity in Zanye, but also the wiser than his years Diego. Looking forward to finding out where you take exceptionally well written story. And by the way, Nadya's not the only one who screams because of Daniel, every time he enters the story, I do too.
MS?! Zach has MS?! OMG, life has been so cruel for twins! Only bright thing is Diego, hope he will be support for Zach the same kind of support Brenxton is for Zayne.
So sad, Zach and Zayne are really good persons, and that scum Daniel is healthy and living his double life free as a bird. I already feel sick knowing how schadenfreude Daniel is going to be...
Mixed........the story is a compelling read but, not for the happiest of reasons.