by ObsidiantheDragon
That was a very sensual story. An offbeat retelling of Beauty and the Beast. I really like it. H o we’ve r I d o have a problem with size. My modern image of dragons is that of Game of Thrones. Drem must be good sized if he is flying around with Alma on his back. As such Drem’s equipment had to be very large if he would normally mate another dragon. I realize that the story is a fantasy and you got around it by the blood drink Hope you write something more in future.
Oh yeah, he is supposed to be *big*, the ritual that allows her to take him is a bit of a cop-out, but hey, I wanted them to do the deed :P
Thank you so much, will definitely keep writing for the foreseeable future ^_^
Fun story, but needed editing. A lot of problems with changing tenses and simple typos. Thanks for sharing it, I very much enjoyed it.
Thanks! If you can point any of those errors to me, I'd very much appreciate it!