Wedding Day Disaster

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"I think it'd be a lot of fun learning." She whispered. "Now, I DO need to go shopping, just because you love seeing me naked, I want to surprise you with some wrappings and trimmings."

"Alright. Bring over whatever you want to pack. We only need one suitcase. We have to be at the airport at six, that means leaving here at five thirty."

"Trust me, I won't be late!" She said, before lifting her head to kiss me again. "At least not as long as you let me up so I can do that shopping." I let her roll us over, my softened dick slipping from her. She climbed to her feet and held a hand out for me. After I was standing again, she pressed herself to me again and kissed me softly. "Your sure this is what you want?"

"I'm sure." I answered. She grinned and turned away. I slapped her ass gently, as she headed to the bedroom to dress. "Just one problem."

"Yeah?"

"I'm, uh, locked out of my apartment!"

She stuck her head out and looked at me with a crooked grin. "Blue key fob in the drawer by the door. Just make sure I get it back, just in case I have to let myself into your place again."

"Got it." I answered, as I headed for the door, feeling surprisingly happy, given what the weekend had brought to my doorstep. Maybe I'd been looking in the wrong place the whole time. Maybe love really was just next door.

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strshdw71strshdw71about 6 hours ago

What the hell kind of parent tattoos a newborn?!?!?! I couldn't read past that part. FAIL.

mfj77mfj777 days ago

Definitely needs chapter 2 and maybe chapter 3. Honeymoon escape week and aftermath.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

You lost me when he agreed to screw her friends. Not sure what happened after that. Totally ridiculous, made no sense whatsoever. Waste of time people, read someone else. LM

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago
damned good

A very good tale of being wrong.

I really enjoyed it.

tsgtcapttsgtcapt2 months ago

Not real happy with the middle; but, great with the ending. He should have had the guts to tell Jen what was wrong with her plan and why Claris should call off the wholevthig with her cheating husbucket!! Thank you!!

davp6255davp62552 months ago

Please tell the tale of the week in the Caribbean and the aftermath. Do Jen and Marsha agree to share?

lc69hunterlc69hunter2 months ago

He was, and is, a dumbass

jwswinglejwswingle2 months ago

I hate that level of deception, "just because we can get away with it". But now he's alert to it, she's learned some, but so have we. Jen likes girls too; Marsha really loves him; a chapter two-or more-is possible, as there are routes to be explored. First, the redirected honeymoon week, where maybe they learn much more about each other and how open they can love. (Caribbean stories often go there). Clara is just a second-tier sex gig, although I guess she doesn't need to be written out. Maybe, The girls start to open up about their relationships, I bet the twins have shared each other, too. Not like Jen really fought the humiliating face-to-face with Marsha's parts. Maybe, Jen NEEDS that shaming, and he's never been into that. Ah hell, turn it into one big happy fuck fest, where Marsha comes to enjoy watching him fuck his way through Jen's address book. Hey, you write as you'd like, but a chapter 2 through 5 seem withing reach, to me.

rbloch66rbloch662 months ago

I’ve read other stories with swapping twins that were cheating and they pissed me off, too. I can’t imagine the amount of selfishness one would have to possess in order to behave like that. If Jen had wanted to let her sister try out her fiancé, she should have chosen to do that without fucking anyone else. I’m happy with the resolution.

greenbeardlkgreenbeardlk2 months ago

MC starts out highly pissed off makes sense. disgusts me to think Jen thinks there is any way to reconcile. 1 star

BlueEyd2BlueEyd22 months ago

The MC is sadly, a weak cuck. Why did he even consider reconciling with her after she intentially lied, cheated, disrespected him while sleeping with 14 other guys. And then she clearly states: "So, I'm not going have sex with anyone else while we work this out." So she has no real plans to stop sleeping with other men.

This is clearly the tale of a self-centered pair of bitches who don't care who they hurt and lie to.

Didn't love this one so far. Needs an ending.

mybikecruisesmybikecruises2 months ago

Would love to read chapter 2 ("honeymoon week") with Ken/Marsha learning more about each other than the friendship and caring that had grown over the 3 yrs living next to each other. Now that they have tasted the fruit of intimacy, can they they have more?

Generally twins trading boyfriends generally get caught fairly often. Especially after long term swapping: one or the other usually makes a mistake (not even as large as the one in this story), says a wrong partner name during date and more likely the feeling during intimacy is usually quite different; (having dated twins), muscles don't develop exactly the same!

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