All Comments on 'Wednesday Morning Matinee'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Too much exposition

You're good at writing the actual sex scenes but the description of *how* someone came to be a new partner is tedious and unnecessary. No need to go into details of how Catherine persuades Anna to join, or vice versa. Go directly to action. No need to go through plot explanations. Coitus will happen anyway because the narrative demands it.

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