All Comments on 'Weekend at the Lake Ch. 04'

Jack's reluctance to fuck Cassie was beyond ridiculous, and became very annoying. A nothing new happened chapter!

This isn't the end, is it?!

I decided to wait until I finished to comment. Overall, I found it a very enjoyable series.

Ignore the haters. There's a fine line between making your characters realistic yet open to an unrealistic scenario, and making it a bad porn script. I liked your balance. This reminds me of something I'd write myself. 5 stars all chapters.

This was the firs that you shared any feelings , smells, or taste! You need to do more which opens up and makes stories more erotic and personal. What it tasted like and smells,

Loved this series of stories and the slow build. It was a fun read!

Allie n Jack should get married. Great story.

Way too much bullshit conversation. Way too much unless unrelated descriptions. A three page story ground and stretched into a tiring book. I found myself skip-speed reading almost every page. Two very generous stars.

Ignore the moaners. It was a great series which will hopefully have a follow up

Very well done story. I found the reluctance to be much more realistic rather than the rushed nature of some stories on here. I did expect more at the end but that is life, right? Hopefully there is a follow-up series because it is all set up for one.

Good premise. Nice build. I liked the characters. Also liked how you didn’t let it play out into a typical happy forever story. Sometimes exploring knowing it’s temporary is better than trying to building something.

Stumbled into this series today and wow - great premise, great pacing, felt more "realistic" (lol) with the boundaries and how things played out. Great work.