All Comments on 'Weekend Getaway'

it stopped in mid flow why?

Look forward to Chapter 2 then and have added you to favorties

So was Sarah on birth control? You didn't say....

Sarah in college... maybe.

Sarah after two kids... no.

Received a scathing anonymous email regarding the incomplete story. My apologies for not labeling the first part (Part 1).

When I reviewed the work after copying and pasting, it was almost 11 pages long. Most works I've read on this site are usually only 3 pages long (if that), so I decided to break it up into 3-page parts. I wasn't trying to trick anyone or leave them hanging "high and dry."

In case you haven't noticed, loyal readers, I'm new.

I'll probably make a few more mistakes before I'm as good as the anonymous emailer.

As for the criticism, keep sending it. I started writing as an English major over 20 years ago, although the subject matter was completely different. As time went on, I wrote less to make time for other things. Having been around the world a few times, I have plenty of material to draw from, and hope to share for your enjoyment as well as mine. If you want to help that process, let me know what you liked and didn't like, but I'd ask that you do so constructively.

This was a good story, but what kept it from being great was the male lead character having 6+ orgasms in a single night (fucking for 4+ hrs?), a tad unrealistic. Also, there wasn't much, if any, seduction.

Good story but needs a better ending or continuation

I haven't looked at this story in awhile, and just now noticed that it's a few pages short! It was previously much longer, with a wild ending. I'll see if I can find the original doc and fix this.