by kyakjl
allowing to urinate should be a given, to cum,,, well that is another.
wow .. captured beautifully her embarrassment and how that turned her on ...
This story is quite unique, it is written extremely well and is almost my exact fantasy. I REALLY enjoyed reading this... I hope you write more!! Many thanks x
Hi, I wondered if part 2 was created in the end? I'm doubting it as I don't see another story under your name but you never know... It happens to match a fantasy I've had for years. Thanks for your erotic story! :)
Loved it amd I will be looking for part 2 or will it become a series!
Hi Everyone, It's me: kyakjl. I feel bad i've left you all hanging on part two. I had no idea that the story would go over so well. Just wanted to let you know that part 2 is coming up soon, I promise. I'll have it done within the next couple days. Thanks for all the positive feedback!
I LOVED this story and have been waiting and checking every day for part 2 -- you ARE going to continue, arent' you? Please hurry!
What a great start. I can't wait for the next installment. Had me tingling before it was over. Is the next chaper finished yet..more more more
The only thing I didn't like was that it ended so soon! It would have been great to have more -- if you know what I mean!
wow! i can not wait to read more- please do not keep us waiting- made me so wet before they have really gotten started. i would be just as bad as she was in her situation. hurry hurry- i want more:)~~~